Jim's Nature Lesson
One day, Jim was riding his bike through the woods to get
away from the school bullies. Bushes rustled and wind shook tree branches as he
passed by. Jim was having the time of his life until he saw the worst thing
that he could’ve possibly imagine. On his trip, Jim fell when his bike hit a
root. While getting up and looked to his left. There was a pure white bunny
rabbit roaming through the forest. He sat there and watched for a while. As he
was about to leave, he saw a black smudge across his vision. As soon as it
crossed his vision, he knew the rabbit was doomed. A large snake approached the
rabbit stealthily and went in for a fatal blow. Jim could only watch as the
rabbit was swallowed whole by the snake. Jim learned an important lesson that day,
he wanted to make sure he was the snake, and not the rabbit next time.
I like the idea of your story. the bunny getting eaten was so unexpected that it almost made me laugh, but then I was sad. good job though!
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